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Is this a prologue to a story you're working on? Because if it's not, it needs to be. You should most definitely base a story on this. It was very ...

Whoa, powerful!!! First off..... corrections: No body likes him. should be nobody. readsa lot there needs to be a space No, thegirl Again, there needs to be a space. The ...

I ran down the hallway and down the steep stairs, and in my hurry, I carelessly let gravity take care of my descent. That is to say, I fell. Goodness, ...

I liked this. A lot. It was, in my opinion at least, easy to understand, but a tad bit predictable. But that's okay. I only found 3 grammatical errors, so ...

Oh my goodness, this was superb! You did an excellent job of showing how mentally ill he was. I would've loved for him to have a tiny rant about his ...

No, I don't know why anyone didn't want to review it. It definitely wasn't because it wasn't any good, because it was. Really good. I know that this is such ...

Whoa, this was really amazing! This is my first critique, so I hope I do it well. The upsides: *The ending was really good. I felt everything Jesse was feeling, ...

Bravo! I really liked this, and even if the title didn't say so, I could totally tell that it was from a personal experience (even if it wasn't.) All of ...

This was very good. I could see it very clearly in my head. Especially the tears part. She knows that everyone thinks they are tears of joy, but they aren't. ...